Feedback from Thurs 19th

On Thursday 19th, we presented our film in progress at an audience screening and got a lot of useful feedback both positive and negative:
the general concensus was that the opening credits, displayed on everyday items, were inventive and well portrayed although some of the shots could benefit from being shorter. Our variety of shots and the editing was well recieved by the audience as was the script in the voice over, and the cliffhanger ending; however the sound editing of the music left much to be desired and we need to re-record the voice over to make it clearer and so it matches closer with the transitions. The transitions were thought to be good although the ripple effect we added was generally disliked, and is something we need to improve in order to make our final product flow more.
This feedback will directly influence our work in the weeks to come and will allow our final product to be as well thought out and professional as possible.

post by Shona ☺